Post Song Lyrics/Freestyle Battles

[YoursNiceDay :)]

Here is the place where you can post lyrics to the songs YOU made.This is also a place for freestyle battles.

[YoursNiceDay :)]

Here is one I made a few weeks ago,it's not complete but here you go:
"The sky is so empty
My soul is long gone
Your love is so mighty
But leave me alone
Cause I don't want to suffer...again!
So just say goodbye
Cause I had too much...pain!
So just say goodbye"

The song is named "Goodbye" and it was longer but I don't remember the rest,it's inspired the following albums:Weezer "Pinkerton",Nirvana "Nevermind",Radiohead "Pablo Honey".It's the first and only song from an album I call "Life Speeds By Like A Dream".

[YoursNiceDay :)]

How was it?And wonder what will you guys post...

[juliansplat4]

Here's a song I mad called "Permanent Lockdown". Ill just say the important part that repeats itself a lot like in most songs.

"Cause it's a permanent lockdown today!
And why
Did we ever have to say go by that day?
Cause Im
Bustin out of here and meeting up someday
It's just
I cant let go of you but I know you cant stay
Just why
Did it have to be
Today?"

Like it?

[Helices]

Ive written three or four songs but i'll post them later. There called "Ribcage", "In the Tunnels", and "Bittersweet". And something else im forgetting.

[Zero Degrees]

You guys have inspired me! i'm gonna make one.

[juliansplat4]

My new song (Its from my only album so far,FML)

I call it FUCK A.L.L. or (Fuck Assholes and Lame Losers)
It's a rap. i highlighted the rhyming parts.

here's a song sample:

Zero Degrease
he's such a bitch
i can kick his ass
in the slightest of ease
its as simple as
fucking with Omni highbreed
come on im a gangster
pass the weed

helices is gay
he sucks at spelling
if i see his fucking face
i'll get nightmares
Night and Day

Fuuuck ALL!

Ya know..except for the part that was making fun of people..that was actually the best rap Ive heard today!

[Sebastian]

See?You are a good rapper and you guys said he should stop being hateful.

[Zero Degrees]

nice rap except for the bad parts..

..but seriously..spell my name right!!

[juliansplat4]

See?You are a good rapper and you guys said he should stop being hateful.

well, he should, but he's shown me the other side of the story. Its a sad, sad, painful, tale....