
by YoursNiceDay :) on Thu Mar 11, 2010 9:04 am
Episode 3: When Lightning Strikes 6/8
All the soldiers surround Ryan and bring a metal wall in front of them. One of them says to Ryan: -You are surrounded,if you give up now you will suffer less. Ryan say with some kind of evil smile: -I never lose a chance to suffer... And then he says: -But this time you will suffer,all of you will suffer. One of them says: -Attack! Meanwhile Lirio manages to trick the two soldiers intro a trap so he can escape the building.Now back to the fight: They all use the wall to crush him but he holds the walls with his power. -You won't be able to compete with us,your just a kid... -A kid who will beat you up! Then he jumps and hits with a thunder one of them.But it had no effect. He says in his mind: -What?It had no effect!I think the shield is made out of Idron,only one person can connect to it and lightning has no effect on it... They all beat him up really bad until he is full of blood on his clothes.He says in his mind while on his knees: -I can't continue fighting,If I die it won't kill my past it will only make it win the fight.I must leave this fight...losing it. He activates his birthmarks and surrounds himself with a sphere of electricity and leaves the place.The warriors leave him alone says: -We will take him later,we know we're is. The warrior looks at a monitor seeing we're Ryan is heading because he introduced a small nanobot in his skin to know we're he is. They take the hostages to the prison-planet Klein and the rest returns to Primoris to tell the news,some of them remain having took completely over LRI and the planet itself. A destroyed part of the city with an huge earthquake is seen while Ryan sits on a high place seeing it.He says: -I can't believe I leave from an current failure and see an past failure...I am a failure,a loser,a freak,a whatever but I won't give up I will make it thought each day...DEAD OR GLORY!Next fight I will give even my life if I must but I will win!
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by YoursNiceDay :) on Fri Mar 12, 2010 11:49 am
Episode 3: When Lightning Strikes 7/8
The storm has passed,the Primoris attack has stopped but Ryan was hurt and the planet was fully controlled.Ryan goes of the hill he was on. -I hate rocks!I kept on hitting them and I'm heavily injured!Last night I slept in a 6 star hotel and now I'm going back home,hiding underground,just perfect! -At least I arrived at the stairs,I wonder what Maine's mother is doing I didn't see her in a year. Maine goes down the stairs until he arrives at a metal door,someone asks: -Whats the password? -I'm Ryan leave me inside or I'll kick you ass. -Well it's not the password but for you this one works too. He opens the door leaving Ryan inside.A muscular man says's to Ryan: -What happened to you Ryan? -I got beaten by Primoris warriors. -So the usual...Maine told me you we're crazy and wanted to help the people of the planet,guess you failed. -So why did you asked? -I was just trying to talk with you,since you left to go to the city to fight for money last year I didn't saw you. -Well I've lost all the money in the finals. -But Maine returned with lots of money. -It's a long story,just tell me where Maine is and leave me alone. -Go straight this tunnel and you can't miss him,he is in the very last room on the left. Ryan goes until he arrives to the door,on the way he talks with some adults and kids that know him.Many of them are afraid of Ryan and just look at him scared.Ryan says in his mind while at the door: -Finally I'm at the door,I just feel like a soldier who returns alive but lost the war. Ryan opens the door seeing Maine and his sick mother on the bed. -Hi Maine... -What happened to you?! -Ain't it oblivious?Why everybody asks?I lost,I got beaten they we're just to powerful,nothing I did to them worked and they we're much more then I could handle.Even if I would had fought with only one I would had lost. Ryan's mother a fifty years old black haired woman says from the bed with a sick voice: -Ryan?I see you are just as angry as you we're when you left...what am I saying you are even more angry. -Oh mom,leave Ryan alone don't you see he is full of blood,by the way take some new clothes. -New?Those a clothes are my old clothes and they are almost as dirty as the ones I wear now! -You decided to leave Riselia Industries so stop wanting too much and take this clothes or remained with those full of blood! -He wanted to sell me! -He said that was not what he wanted. -I saw some metal connector soldiers enter LRI from the back of the building after you left,I think we should stop talking about that subject,I should have not trusted him from the beginning. -Just take the clothes and take a bath. Ryan takes the old,dirty clothes and takes bath in another room.
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by YoursNiceDay :) on Fri Mar 12, 2010 12:46 pm
Episode 3:When Lightning Strikes 8/8
The ships are ready to land on a huge silver planet with a shield protecting it,that is Primoris and near it the planet Ryan dreamed,a sun made out of electricity. The ships make contact with the planet and ask for permission to land,a hole in the shield of the planet opens and the ships land. Inside the shield a extremely modern and utopia planet seen,everything is made out of a shiny white metal.In the middle a very big castle-like structure is opening it's "doors" for the ships to land.Two soldiers go to king Sundim to tell him how the attack worked out. -Oh king of Primoris we arrived. -So did the attack worked like planned? -Almost my king. The king looks ugly at them and asks: -What did you idiots messed up this time? -Well Lirios Riselia escaped the building and we don't know we're he is and... The king says fast: -I don't care about Riselia,I want to know if the planet is ours! -Yes it is my king. -Send the commander of the army as the new leader of LRI.Also did you found any information about a metal connector? -I was about to say,he attacked us when we got there,he was easy to defeat but he escaped... -He also escaped!What we're you doing there letting everybody escape like they want! -But we introduced a nanorobot in his skin so we know we're he is hiding. -Anything else? -Yes,we found out that the metal connector was allied with Riselia and the metal connector had a dream about the sun,then he suddenly teleported from the building after finding out the Riselia was spying on him,he also had the ability to shot lightning. -You can leave now... The soldiers leaves and a man says from Sundim's back: -So he is still on Tenebrae. -Yes master... -And he dreamed the myth,we must cache him and find the next ones so I can rule the entire universe! In another place a blond haired 16 years old boy says: -So his still alive?I can't wait to see my old "friend" again...to have my revenge for what he did to me. And then he makes a fireball in his hand and makes an evil laugh.
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by YoursNiceDay :) on Sun Mar 14, 2010 10:54 am
Episode 4: Everything Has A Price 1/4
Maine and Angela,his mother are sleeping,Ryan comes and knocks at the door.Maine wakes up and heads to the door opening it, then says: -Good morning Ryan,how did you slept? -Horrible,I'm hurt very bad. -You will be better in a couple of days. -I hope so... -Oh and I want to stay with my mother,I didn't see her since we left. -Could I stay too?I don't wanna sit all day long in my room alone. -Yes of course. Angela wakes up and says smiling: -What's happening? Maine responds: -I was just talking with Ryan. -So now that we are all awake could any of you two tell me how was in the city? Maine says: -Well I'm not in the mood to tell a story,could you do it for me Ryan? -Yeah,why not.So Angela was sick and we left to get some money using my powers to fight others.We arrived and slept in the back of a restaurant,the next days we searched for an underground tournament.Luckily we found one,my first enemy was Michael a earth connector.During the fight I had too much power and passed out. After 2 days I recovered from near-dead and fought him again and I won but the public didn't like that I was a metal connector so they disqualified me.We trained a whole year to fight next year again. I won fight after fight until I fought Michael again in the finals.My birthmarks activated and the public started saying I'm a freak and things like that so I gave up,I could have beaten him easily with the amount of power I had but I would have just proven I'm freak like they said.I gave him all the money I won until then and we met Lirios... Maine says fast: -I told her from there on. Ryan says: -I wonder what happened with Lirio...
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by YoursNiceDay :) on Sun Mar 14, 2010 11:30 am
Episode 4: Everything Has A Price 2/4
Someone in a robe covering his body and face goes down the same stairs Ryan did and knocks at the door.The muscular man asks: -Whats the password? -Lily He opens the door and says: -I can't believe you remember the password. -It comes from my name so it's hard to forget it. -I didn't see you in 5 years,what makes you come here and what's with the robe? -It's a long story Dave,is a kid named Ryan here? -Yes he stays in a room alone but right now I think he is... -With a brown haired 12 years old boy named Maine? -Yes,but how do you know about Maine and Ryan? -I like I said it's a long story.So where does he stay? Dave says in his mind: -Looks like everybody has a long story,first Ryan now him... Then he says: -Go straight this tunnel,he is in the last room on the left. He goes to the door and listens to see what are they talking about then knocks on the door.Maine asks: -Who knocks? The Ryan says: -Go and find out. Maine opens the door and looks at the stranger asking: -Who are you? -My name is Ailesir. -So are you new here? -Yes,I new here and I wanted to ask if I could stay with someone called Ryan since his room is empty. Ryan asks: -How do you know my name and how do you know I stay alone? -Dave,the guard told me. -OK,you can stay with me if you want. Maine says -Well Ryan you can go with him if you want. -OK,let's go Ailesir. They both go to Ryan's room.
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by YoursNiceDay :) on Mon Mar 15, 2010 9:06 am
Episode 4: Everything Has A Price 3/4
Ryan opens the door and lets Ailesir inside. -Nice room. Ryan says: -If you slept in a 6 star hotel then it doesn't seem like it's nice. -Believe me I can understand what are you saying. -So what happened to you? -Two metal connector soldiers took over my home and beaten me,I escaped and came here.But a better question would be what happened to you? -I also got beaten by metal connectors. -But why did I kid like you fought a army of metal connectors? -Maybe I will tell you when I have trust in you. -You don't have trust in me? -I lost my trust in myself a long time ago so don't expect me to have trust in you.And also why do you cover your face? -But do you want me to tell a story?And I cover my face because it looks horrible after I been beaten. -If the story is interesting then yes. -It's about the planet.A short history of the planet. -Go on,I am bored anyway.At least I don't have to stay all day long alone since Maine,my friend, and his mother are talking. -At start the planet was a very organized but primitive compared to other planets,it had buildings and all that but it was also lacking power... -Why did you stopped? -I wanted to add a little pause. -OK now continue -And Primoris was just getting most advanced,stealing technologies for the planet of the fire connectors,Fuego... -I used to know a fire connector. -Could you please let me finish?Very well...Primoris used the power and technology they had to make a deal with the planet... Ailesir says in his mind: -It was the wrongest thing I ever done,I should have refused and fight The continues: -And they gave us technology and lots of money but they controlled us like puppets,like dead puppets.One company gained the most,the one that made the deal,Lirios Riselia Industries...and it also gained monopoly on the planet causing millions of jobless people.The industrialization also made the planet lose it's forests and nocturnal animals.Not to speak about the diseases because of the extreme amounts of polluted air. -Everything has a price right? -You said that better than I could have said it...
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by YoursNiceDay :) on Mon Mar 15, 2010 9:29 am
Episode 4: Everything Has a Price 4/4
In a distant place someone is fighting a group of earth connectors.Suddenly someone appears and beats them all then says: -I need your help. And he responds: -Why would I?I can easily kill you right now! -Really?I just beat 30 earth connectors with no effort. -You have a point...so what do you what me to do? -You'll see later,right now I want you to come with me. -But what do I get? -You won't get killed. -OK... Then he makes a small earthquake and connects to the water inside bringing it to the surface,then freezes the guy.After that he makes a fireball in his hand and says: -So what do I get!? He destroys the ice,the other one attacks with the fireball but he easily manages to defend himself. -You can't connect or what? -I'm a metal connector but you are not worth the fight. -So then why do you need me? -To do my dirty laundry. -I hope that was just an alternate way of saying you want me to do a small job.It's a crime right? And you don't want to get your hands dirty. -No...I want you to chance a few kids. -What?You can rather kill me than go and steal kids! -They aren't usual kids,they are the guardians... Says interested: -Oh...now that is surly not only "dirty laundry". -But I don't want you to get involved too much right now. -Why? -Cause I only want you to find the 4 others and give me the info. -You found one of them? -Yes I did...he's on Tenebrae. -I can't believe I can get to fight with the phoenix. -You won't fight him until I will need you to,right now you must only find the others.And the next one will be a fire connector so go to Fuego,the 2nd planet from sun and search for him. -And what if he is not there? -Search on every single planet for him then!
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by YoursNiceDay :) on Fri Mar 19, 2010 12:39 pm
Episode 5: Hunted and Haunted 1/4
The 5 moons of a huge planet near Tenebrae are starting to align.When they finished the alignment a huge blast hits the planet... Meanwhile Ryan stays outside the room and thinks about his past and what to do next. -It just seems so weird I'm in this place again,my life is stagnant and pointless,I could commit suicide right now... Maine opens his door and sees Ryan then tells him: -Good morning Ryan. -Shut up!Stop the "good morning" thing,why can't you understand I don't have such a thing as a good morning?! -It seems somebody did not slept well... -I didn't sleep! -OK,let's change the subject so how is Ailesir? -He's in my room,probably sleeping.Actually let's see... They open the door and see blood coming from the wall but Ailesir was missing. -What the...?Where is he?And what's with the blood on the wall? -It's not simply blood,it says something. -Hey your right. -Let me read:"Leave or you will die" -Now that makes me want me to stay in this place for a little longer. -Are you crazy? -Yes I am,why are you asking? -Nevermind... -I wonder who wrote that... -Well,there is no way that guy could go without knowing the password right? -And how did he pass without me noticing!? -And how do you want me to answer that? -Let's go and check out Dave. They go throught the tunnel,not seeing anybody only blood in some places until they arrive at the entrance.Maine says: -Well his not here and I'm totally freaked out. -I just hope that guy did not hurt anybody or else I will kill him! -Of course he hurt someone,this place is full of blood and warnings. -But I was here,how did he did that without noise? -Let's just go back to my mother to see if she is good. They run back and open the door from Maine's room. -Mom are you good? Angela responds: -Yes, why not? -But...but... Ryan says: -Someone killed or took everybody in the hideout! Ailesir, even more hurt, opens the door and tells them: -Maybe you wanted to say SOMETHING.
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by YoursNiceDay :) on Sun Mar 21, 2010 12:54 pm
Episode 5: Hunted and Haunted 2/4
The wind blows powerfully from Ailesir's back and Ailesir makes a very scared face.Ryan asks: -What was that?And what did you meant by "something"?Do you even know how did this?! Suddenly everything turns into black and white and a big white ghost with 6 arms,a scary mouth and a black tail kill Ailesir then spiritually connects to the air making it toxic,Maine and his mom die suffering but Ryan doesn't feel anything and he's very scared.With fury he says: -NOOOOOOOO! He wakes up screaming.Ailesir tells him: -Ryan are you OK? -Do I look like I'm OK?You we're just being killed by a ghost in my dream! -It was... -Just a dream? -NOT!...just a dream,the moons of Omnia are aligning and sometimes ghosts escape from the moons and go on this planet until the alignment is over and they are absorbed back but if they manage to enter the body of the some connector type they we're then the other soul is absorbed.And this is happening today... -Are you making jokes?I heard legends about this thing but you are the only legends. -Legends?Hundreds of people are killed each year because of this,even I fought one before. -But if they want just a let's say water connector then why are they killing non-connectors also? -They can only identify and take the soul after they killer the "prey". -And what are connectors soul's doing on Omni's moons? -Each moon has a specific rock which can absorb it's corresponding connector soul.And many adventures came too close to Omnia and they lost they're soul. -Your crazy...and how do you know so many things by they way?! -I used to live on another planet and learned there before I was send to Tenebrae. -So you are a non-connector? -Yes,I am.
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by YoursNiceDay :) on Sun Mar 28, 2010 10:14 am
Episode 5: Hunted and Haunted 3/4
Ryan exits the room and goes to the bathroom and looks in the mirror. -I look horrible,this is the 2nd nightmare I have...first the phoenix thing and now the ghost?What is it with me?The scary thing is that the ghost might be real... Ryan's reflection turns black and white and then into the ghost. -I know you aren't real it's just my mind playing tricks on me. The ghost says: -Really?Then how could I do this! The ghost draws his hand out of the mirror and snuggles Ryan's neck powerfully.Ryan breaks the window and cut's his hand because of this but the ghost comes out of the broken window on the floor. -You really think you can beat me?! Ryan hits the ghost with a thunder that makes a hole in the ghost but he quickly recovers.Meanwhile Maine hears the noise and opens the door asking: -What's with the noise? The ghost disappears and Ryan tell him: -Didn't you see the ghost!? -What ghost?And did you broke the mirror?What is with you Ryan? -But the ghost was here I swear!The monster was in the mirror and I wanted to kill him. -Are you sure about your sanity? -NO!But I SAW with my own eyes the ghost!Even Ailesir told me that the moons of Omnia aligned and they released a ghost,go and ask him.He told me this after I had a dream with that same ghost and in my dream he killed everybody in the hideout. -So the new guy is just as crazy as you. -Just go and ask him and you will see. -How crazy he is? -Shut Up!Let's go already... They go to Ryan room but Ailesir is missing. -This is the same thing that happened in my dream. -Maybe he just left because he heard the noise and wanted to call help. A wind storm starts in the hideout and everybody is scared. -He's a wind connector,just like in my dream... Then the ghost comes from the floor taking Maine as a prisoner. -What do you want from us?Nobody is a wind connector here! -And how do I know you ain't lying? -This way... Ryan hits his hand with a thunder and releases Maine then he says to Maine: -I'm crazy huh? -Let's run!
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