Episode 5: Hunted and Haunted 4/4
Ryan and Maine run from the ghost and on the way they meet Ailesir.Ryan asks him:
-Where we're you?
-I left the room to search for the ghost after you left.
-Well we didn't have to search for him,he found us.
The ghost is very near to them.
-How did you beat the ghost you said you fought before.
-Long story but I used a rock from Omnia,but it was stolen from me.
-Enough!Did you really thought you tricked me?You are Riselia!Ailesir is Riselia spelled in reverse how stupid do you think I am?
-No time to explain!
-How should I beat the ghost?
-Activate your birthmarks and order him to leave!
-Why do you think he listens to me?
-Just do it!
Ryan activates his birthmarks and orders him to leave with the same strange voice he had in the re-match with Michael:
-Leave this place and go back to the moon Aeolus,the spirit of the phoenix spoken!
The ghost leaves scared and confused.
The birthmarks disappear and Ryan says:
-Great my head hurts and the ghost is still...what?how did it work?
-That thing again...
-You have so much to explain Lirio!
-You are not ready to hear it yet.
-I demand you to tell me!And why should I trust you?You wanted to sell me to Primoris and now you came to complete the job right?
-I would not be so hurt if would be on they're side,they took LRI and the whole planet with it.
-So when I lost it was more that I think...
-They might be searching for you right now.
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Episode 6: Revenge 1/4
Lirio sits in the hallway waiting for Ryan,Maine gets close to Lirio and tells him:
-So you and Ryan are leaving today,right?
-Yes,the Primoris soldiers are surely searching for us and we are just causing trouble if we stay here.
-I just wanted to say goodbye to Ryan before he leaves.
-He's coming right now...
Ryan approached Lirio with a hateful face and doesn't even look at Maine.
-Don't forget I was not joking when I said that at the smallest sign of betrayal I will attack you with all my power.
Maine asks Ryan:
-Why are you even leaving with him?You could both go on separate paths.
-We are both hurt and wanted so the best thing to do is to work with him for a time...
Ryan looks at Lirio.
-...also I still want him to tell me all he knows about me.
-So do you want to say goodbye to anybody else except Maine before you leave?
-I won't even say goodbye to Maine...let's leave already cause I hate this place it reminds me of my past.
They both go to the exit while Maine watches them and says silently:
-Good luck Ryan...
Dave sees Ryan and Lirio and tells them:
-So you are leaving Riselia?
-Yes I'm leaving with Ryan,we don't want to cause problems.
-How do you know Riselia?
Then says in his mind:
-I so wanted to say that...
They exit the hideout seeing the destroyed part of the city.
-I could have saved this place...
-Ironic since you are guilty for this.
-I wish I could say it was not me but I'm not even sure since I don't remember who did it me or my old "friend" everyday I lie myself that I was not the one who made the earthquake...but let's change the subject,we're are we going anyway?
-Straight north until we get to the Noxarbo Forests,from there on we'll see...
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Episode 6: Revenge 2/4
Somebody is hiding near a rock and watches them,then he says in his mind:
-I can't believe I found him...I can finally get revenge after all this years of living alone,suffering and surviving each day.
Meanwhile Ryan talks with Lirio:
-So are we really going to go on foot?
-No...we will wait until the police searches the place and take them down,after that we tie them up
with rope and hide them in a destroyed building.We take the F.A. (Flying Automobile) and leave this place.
-Sounds like a good plan.So since you pretty much controlled the world when are they usually coming?
-Look up and that will answer your question.
Ryan looks up and see the police coming to check the place for rebels,connectors and for Riselia.
-Connect to the ship and close them in a metal sphere.
-I can't connect to metal at such high distances.
The police saw them and changed the direction heading at them.
-Police,stop right there!
-Do I have to do everything here?
He take a special kind o bomb which makes the FA have no power.Ryan make a thunder ball in his hand and
they give up.Lirio ties them with a rope and hides them in a building.
-I hope they will stay there some time...
-Since we have a long way to go I will follow your advice .When we get to Noxarbo Forests I'm gonna
teach you some new things.
They enter the FA and a 17 years old boy appear right in front of them.Ryan asks:
-Who are you?
-My name is Ruo Perdo,you killed my father and I want revenge!
-When did I killed your father?
-When you and that fire connector we're fighting a huge earthquake killed millions of people one of them was my father.And I will kill you for that...
-I also killed the dad of one of my friends so I have a reputation for killing fathers.So do you want to fight?It will just hurt more after you will lose believe me I've lost many times...
Ruo connected to the earth creating a hand out of the ground.He makes the fist head to Ryan but he
connects to metal and covers his body in it no feeling the punch.Ryan heads to Ruo and hits him a
few times really good.Ruo makes a sand storm and hides underground.Ryan says not sure on himself:
-He's much better than I would have expected,let's try something extreme...
Ryan make two thunder and they hit each other removing the sand storm but Ruo from underground makes
even more then he makes a earth golem which he controls from underground and the golem hits Ryan
destroying most of the metal covering his body.Ryan hits the Golems foot with a thunder but it quickly recovers.The golem speaks:
-Any last word?
-Yes...since you are so good in a earth environment I will just remove all earth surrounding you.
-And how do you expect that to work?
Ryan connects to all metal he can and makes it into 2 walls destroying the golem,then makes a few big
metal spikes and tries to hit Ruo which is underground.Ruo goes out of the ground and Ryan closes both
of them in a huge metal sphere then he says:
-Now your in my territory...
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Episode 6: Revenge 3/4
From outside Lirio is looking at the sphere and he says:
-I wonder what happens inside...
Meanwhile helicopters start coming because the FA with police didn't return.
-They came much faster that I would have expected,at least they don't see me because of the sphere but I must leave so they will not see me...I have no idea how will Ryan escape but he knows we're I'm going.
Lirio starts the FA and leaves while the police in the helicopters doesn't see him.
In the sphere Ruo and Ryan look in each others eyes from distance,Ruo says:
-You really think I will lose so easy?
Ruo takes 2 swords and heads to Ryan.
-So you want to fight with swords?Then I will play your game...
Ryan connects to metal and creates a sword and a shield then he goes to fight with Ruo.
Ruo hits Ryans shield with one of his swords and Ryan attacks back with his sword,Ruo uses the other sword to defend from the attack.Ruo jumps high and then head straight to Ryan with both swords to hit him.Ryan makes a shield to defend himself then makes a thunder and wants to hit Ruo with it but Ruo dumps his swords so he won't be hit.
Outside the police found the two cops in the building Riselia hide them.They ask them:
-Who did this to you two?
-Riselia and the metal connector Primoris searches but they took our FA and hide us here.
-So we hit two rabbits with a shot...
The police gets them out of the building and they see the sphere.
-This was not here before.Do you know who is inside?
-That's what we wanted to ask you two but we think it's the metal connector.
-And then we're is Lirios Riselia?
-We're not sure.
-Could we track the FA?
-Yes we can...
Meanwhile inside the sphere Ryan asks Ruo:
-Any other weapon?
-That's all I had with me...I didn't expect to met you.I just saw you while you we're fighting the ghost and then I was spying on you.
-This is what you call revenge?
Ryan covers his body in metal and hits Ruo,then Ryan attacks the second time and Ruo tries to defend but Ryan covers half of Ruo's body in metal so he can't move and keeps on hitting him.
Ruo then screams:
-Just finish me already!When you killed my father my only purpose in life remained to get revenge on
the one who is guilty for killing him,now that you defeated me I have no purpose in life and I fell like a failure...
-I felt like a failure many times,one of them is when the earthquake happened.
-You killed so many people you deserve to die!I just wanted to be the one who does it!!
-But I'm not sure if I'm the one who made the earthquake,I has fighting someone when that happened and I got so much power that I forgot who did it,so if you can't beat me you could try and go with me to be trained by Riselia then get revenge on the other one and then on me.
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Episode 6: Revenge 4/4
After Ruo passed out Ryan says in his mind:
-Great,now he passed out,at least Lirio is outside with the FA and I don't have to drag him around all
day.Now lets remove the sphere it's pretty hard to maintain it...
Ryan de-connects the metal and the whole sphere crashes.Ryan see's the helicopters and all the police then he says while falling:
-I can't believe how many they are...and Riselia left without me,now how am I supposed to find Noxarbo Forests?
Ryan covers himself and Ruo in metal so they can't be seen.
The police in the helicopters gives some orders:
-Search for Riselia and the metal connector!Then send all the information back to Primoris!
Ryan from the remaining of the sphere says:
-Great now Primoris soldiers will search me,like the police wanting my head was not enough.I must
leave now,Lirio said Noxarbo Forests is straight north so that's where I'm going.
While the police searches the remainings of the sphere,Ryan escapes with Ruo.
On Primoris king Sundim is looking at a screen.
-King Sundim,we have news for you.
-What is it?Have you caught the metal connector?
-We we're close but he escaped again,he was with Riselia in the destroyed part of Tenebrae.They
stolen a F.A. after taking down a lookup duo of cops.Riselia left with the FA but we can track the FA
and it seems like he is heading north to Noxarbo Forests.
-And where is the metal connector heading since we have a nanobot in his skin?
-The same place.Also we found two swords,they we're used by a 17 years old rebel,Ruo.
-So we have a rebel,a metal connector and Riselia,perfect...
-What should we do?
-We will send some soldiers to surround them when they get there and then destroy Noxarbo Forests,they can run but they can't hide...
-OK my king,we will follow them.
The king stopped the screen and he speaks with somebody in his back:
-Master,we will soon have the metal connector,any news about the next guarding?
-I've send someone on Fuego to search for him.
-But why didn't we search for them when they we're younger?
-Because before they have the dream they don't have the full power and thus we don't need them.We know the metal connector had the dream since we searched Riselia's office,if the first one had the dream it means the others will shortly have it.
Sundim's eyes become blank and he says:
-I'm sorry master,I will never doubt you again.
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Episode 7: Lost in the Dust 1/4
Ryan is seen drinking some water,Ruo looks at him and says:
-You better like that water cause it might be the last one you will drink.
-Why would you think that?
-We are heading to the desert,one of the most dangerous parts on this planet.
-Wait a second...there is a desert on Tenebrae?
-Yes and we are heading straight to it.
-How do you know about it?
-I was there before,after my dad died I traveled around the world searching for you.
-I would say I'm honored if I didn't knew you wanted to kill me.
-I still hate you!
-I also hate myself so we have something in common.
-What's you name anyway?
-My name in Ryan,actually I have no idea what's my real name because I never met my parents.
-I already told you my name,it's Ruo Perdo but enemy's call me Ruo.
-How do friends call you?
-Friends?Do my biggest enemy count?
-Kinda.Is that me?
-Then who is he?
-I would rather say a story than a name...
-Well go on...
-I was born on Silvae,since birth I was not wanted,actually I was hated by my mother,my dad,by everybody.
When I was a kid I saw how brutal Primoris soldiers could be,I used to stay in the forests to hide
from them,many times I found dead body's in the forest,it's not like I cared I hated them too
like they did.At school kids used to trow rocks at me,I wanted to fight back but I was only a kid and
I was horrible at connecting.The whole everybody against me was not so bad as the rest of my life.
The soldiers killed my mother and after that me and my dad run away in a Primoris ship
that was going to Tenebrae,we arrived safe and moved in the city.And if my life was not
miserable enough you and the fire connector fought, I run away when the earthquake happened but
I got to remember your face,my dad died and I got saved by the police.After that I run away becoming
a bounty hunter to get money I traveled around the world wanting to get revenge on you since only
you we're still on this planet,the other was send on the prison-planet Kleine.A week ago I returned
to the destroyed part of the city and entered the hide-out,after that you already know...so I hate
Primoris soldiers more that I hate you.
-We could leave now,Lirio is using a FA so he might be there in a few hours and we can only get
there in a few days.
-Where are we heading?You didn't get to tell me that.
-Noxarbo Forest,have you been there before?
-Yes,like I say I like hiding in forests and it is a great hiding place for rebels like me.
-So your one of the rebels?
-I used to be but I left them,they live underground in a city near Noxarbo Forests,we could visit them for some help.
-But why did you say I could die in the desert?I'm more powerful than you are!If somebody would die that would be you.
-We will see...
Ryan and Ruo are seen going north heading to the desert.
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Episode 7: Lost in the Dust 2/4
Riselia is flying in the FA and looks back saying:
-They could be following me....I should take out the localizer.
He stops the FA and opens it taking something out of the engine.
-That should do it...
He trows it in the earthquake hole.
-Now I should leave,I'm sure Ryan is already ahead of me if he is still alive.
Meanwhile Ryan and Ruo are having a race.Ruo is ahead and looks back at Ryan saying to him:
-Maybe you are a better connector but you can't beat me in race!
-I'm barely trying...
Ryan speeds up and goes ahead of Ruo.
-What we're you saying?!
-I was saying...
He connects to the earth under his feet and makes it move really fast.
-....Eat my dust!
Ryan looks at him smiling the responds:
-So that's how your playing...I can play that game too.
While Ruo looks behind to hear what Ryan is saying,Ryan makes a metal wall in front of Ruo and Ruo
hits it.Ryan the surrounds him body in lightning and goes at almost light-speed stopping only when he sees a warning sign.
-Is this the desert Ruo was talking about?
Ryan waits for Ruo to come and he tells him:
-So this is the place,ain't it?
-Yes...are you sure you want to enter?We might die because of heat before we get to be killed by the sand connectors.I know most of my tricks from one of them but I'm not sure if he's still here.
-What is this place anyway?
-It used to be a normal desert but after the Primoris attacks some connectors came to Tenebrae and hide in the desert,the place they we're sure Primoris will not follow them.In time they managed to be better and better at something they call "sand connecting" I use that for some of my tricks,if you can control every little small piece of earth then you really easy create sand storms and other things but they are better than I am.
-So do we enter or not?
-It's the only way so yes.
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Here you can put reviews for the series as a whole and I will post character info and series info.I did this at the start of Post Cartoon Ideas but this will be more complete.
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Awesome! Episode "Revenge" is great! I love it! just one question :
Who's the person/connector say that ? Who is he ?
King Sundim says that to the guy behind him.The king is being controlled by somebody but we won't find out too much about him this chapter (season).
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