Ryan is a 15 years old metal connector with silver hair and eyes.He's usually angry and impulsive but has good inside and wants to fix his past mistakes.Ryan is hated by everyone on Tenebrae because 5 years ago he was involved in a fight which destroyed a big part of the most populated city on the planet killing millions of people living there.Even before the incident Ryan was hated because he was a metal connector.He was born on Primoris but has no memory of living there because he was too young,he grew on Tenebrae.He was found by a old man,he also gave Ryan his name..."Ryan".
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Cool! I always liked Ryan's impulsive personalities in your story!
I will add more info to his character and also add others.I also like Ryan's impulsive personality.
Richard Maine Gabriel is a 12 years old non-connector boy.Before the earthquake incident he lived in a big house and his family was rich,one of the only rich family's on Tenebrae and they we're living in the biggest and richest part of Tenebrae.His dad died in the earthquake and his house was destroyed,they ended up hiding underground.His mom got sick from living with other sick people,eating bad food,not going outside etc. Even after all the tragedy in his life Maine is very optimistic and happy most of the times.When he met Ryan he hated him.Ryan felt bad and wanted to help Maine by getting money for his mom.After some time Maine befriended Ryan and forgave him.While he was rich he learned many things,he is one of the smartest kids on Tenebrae.
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Lirios Riselia is 57 years and he is the richest man on Tenebrae and has monopoly over the planet due to a deal years ago with Primoris.He was born on Silvae and at 18 years old he began his archeologist career.He was send to Tenebrae when Primoris attacked Silvae.
(little info right?and half of it is spoiler )
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Ruo Perdo is a 17 years old earth connector born on Silvae in a period of war.After his mom died he and his dad secretly left to Tenebrae.When he was 12 years old his dad died in the earthquake incident and he left to search for the one guilty for this.He learns how to better control his powers from Marco,a sand connector.At one point he was one of the rebels but left to continue his search.He returned to the destroyed part of Tenebrae because he didn't find Ryan.He goes in the same hideout as Ryan and sees him while he was fighting the ghost.He fights with Ryan but loses so he and Ryan go to train with Lirio in Noxarbo Forests.On the way he and Ryan have lots of adventures.
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After the old king of Primoris was killed Sundim took his place.After 5 years he started the war against Fuego.After taking over Fuego they stolen all the inventions they had and attacked the other planets.The king is controlled by somebody but nobody knows that.The king wants the guardians, one of which is Ryan but Ryan doesn't know.
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Episode 7: Lost in the Dust 3/4
Ryan and Ruo both see a little town ahead.Ryan says:
-Let's hurry up! I will die if I don't drink anything soon.
-You will die if you continue being so stupid.
-What do you mean?
-It's clearly a trap.
-It's just a empty town in the middle of a desert!
-Same thing I thought but then out of nowhere the bandits appeared and attacked me.
-Just follow me I'm sure I can defeat some "dust connectors".
-They are "sand connectors" and at least let's have a plan.
Ruo looks to see if Ryan is still there.
-I was talking with you!
-Oh yeah?I was not,come on already!
Ryan goes and takes some water then looks at Ruo and says to him:
-Don't you want some?
-It could even be poisoned.One of them told me that the water is sometimes being poisoned so that they could more easily steal or kill how comes here.
-They don't have what do steal from me so I guess they could try to kill me...
The wind starts blowing more powerfully and they see the bandits on the houses.Ryan looks at them and the says:
-It was a trap!
Ruo rolls his eyes then responds:
-So now you get it...
-Then all else we can do is FIGHT!
One of them says:
-We won't TRY to kill you...we WILL kill you!
They all move they're hands and a huge storm is seen coming from the desert.
-I don't see anything!
-Let's hide in a house.
They both run to one of the wood houses but the house explodes and they are both hit a few times by the bandits.
Ryan sees one of them and wants to hit him with a thunder but the sand redirects the thunder and it heads to Ruo.Ruo wants to make a sand wall but even the sand under him controlled by the sand connectors.Ruo connects to a rock very deep in the sand and covers him in it thus protecting him from the thunder.
-Don't make thunders!They control everything surrounding us.
-Let's slit up,we could take out more of them that way.
Ruo says to Ryan:
-No,we should stick together if we split up we will just become easy targets.
But Ryan was already too far to hear him.
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